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Tier 3 Release: DJSHORT S03E01 - A Riot in Gotham

🕑 Added 2025-09-25 15:45:34 +0000 UTC
Tier 3 Release: DJSHORT S03E01 - A Riot in Gotham

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DanteJackal

As in a synopsis? Hmm other than direct threads, I dunno if I ever wrote one... Will rectify and post one in a bit :)

Hendrik

I try to find the overview about all shorts. Where I can find it now?

DanteJackal

Yeah, plan is to have more character driven elements and/or interactions than just bonking or going in a tangent :) Glad you enjoyed it and I take your points onboard :)

Derink Derink

Animation Gorgeous animation. I like the action sequences, and Damian's smirk at the start was great. Sexy Damian's face is real. Good animation with all of Damian getting tossed around. Riot is so fluid in his movements. I love it. The leap from the roof to the tackle was amazing. Damian’s face when the Riot goes in and he grimaces was fantastic! Riot's little wiggle as he goes in was a nice touch. Your animation skills just improve with each animation. There’s so much attention to detail. It’s fantastic. Well done with the Damian crying moments. There was one moment early on, when Damian was on the bike when he first arrived…It looked like he was going into T pose rather than sitting up on the bike. Story The story was fantastic. Great start with the montage of the city. I love details like that to set things up and use the boys as cameos. Little details like that are what make you stand out. I loved Tim checking in, and Damian slowly becoming hopeless. You really captured the start of this arc without going too dark…then that ending, holy cow, Tim and Damian are a couple for real. I love how Tim just gets it and protects Damian. Really made me emotional. Great Job. Feel bad for Damian. His slow descent from smug to afraid was well done. It was just dark enough without going overboard. Spicy Bits- Riot sticking his tongue down Damian's throat was amazing. Kind of wa. Really love the frotting at the start and then later when Riot had one in and one out. Nice touch with making the bike basically a third character. Love how Riot was playing with him. Great positions. I like how Riot was just covering Damian the whole time. Really showcases his overpowering nature. Great idea to do 1 in and one out. It helps sell what Damian is going through because one of them is always visible. My one minor complaint was that Damian cumming was a bit disappointing. Feels like people who were going into this for Damian got cheated, as it was like 1.5 seconds long. That was a letdown. It should have been like 3-5 seconds to give it screen time. As a side note to this, I feel like this is kind of a recurring issue that I’d like to see corrected. Thinking back to Dante in Happy Campers, Jason in Clayface, and Damian in this one. It seems like sometimes “starring: characters got cheated a bit. They are billed as starring in the animation, but then they end up getting treated as afterthoughts. Damian’s climax was one of those moments. Riots fine, but I’m here for Damian, and a blink and you miss cumshot was a let down. Pretty much every animation this season has at least three characters in it, so make sure everyone has their moment and not just a “here’s 5 seconds at the end for them,” kind of thing. Just something to be mindful of when plotting, I would say. Make sure that one character or character moment doesn’t get pushed to the back of the animation and has to get cut short. Damian got tons of screen time in this, but just that cumshot should have been a bit longer…but it is sort of connected to my other point, haha. Other All the sound effects fit well, and I loved Damian’s dialogue in this. Perfect. It was never like, “Please shut up.” The lighting effects with Riot were amazing. The silent credits were chilling. Hurricane Dante was great. Damian’s leg being a recurring moment was great. The Audio was spot on. That scream as we transitioned to the time moment was chilling. Really feel for Damian. Final Thought Great season opening. It definitely set the tone; this is what a season premiere should be. I love the character bits, got into Damian’s head. It’s better than anything in season 1 or 2 by far. Season 1 was basic sex scenes, season 2 expanded on the idea by doing more story elements, and then this added more character elements, and I love it. This is how you bring the DJU to life. There’s so much I want to ramble about, but I’ll stop, haha. Thank you for an amazing animation, DJ! I'm sure I forgot to say a ton. Very respectful to Damian while also getting the dark theme across. Hard line to walk, but you did it to perfection. Final Rank-10/10


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