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An Archer's Promise Chapter 71: Rush

🕑 Added 2025-03-28 16:22:57 +0000 UTC

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SsanghwaSilver

Efforts needs to be made so the fic's B-Plot doesn't turn into Yandere Battle Royale. Also, for some reason '-Warning: End of Attempted Rape-' was funny to me. We need a warning that attempted rape is ending? But yeah I do know what was meant here.

Luilli Alvarez

Haren y todo resuelto

Andres1234

Thanks for the chapter

Timurlenk

Kinda wonder if Olga really is just trying to prod Celestine. Seems like she protest-to much on Celestine's obsession with Archer.

Benny

Good chapter! The beginning part with Claudia and a recovering Klaus was sad and a bit uncomfortable to read. The poor man believes his wife and bastard father did the deed and is taking out his bottled up sadness and rage on Claudia. I still think that there is a good chance that in this moment of weakness Drago will offer a deal to Klaus, healing his body but also give him strength and power that he will lose himself to that very power and forcing Claudia and Archer to end him. Moving on, oh boy Olga and Celestine arguing over Archer to the point that fists were about to fly. And Olga let slip that she kissed Archer much to Celestine and her own shock lol Again this side quest to save Chloe will make Drago act in Archer absence. Which will make things worse when he gets back.

NimtheWriter

Hmm, truthfully even I can't answer that question because the answer itself can change depending on how I write the upcoming chapters. Like, when I first started the story, I never had a thought about there being anything major going on between Archer and Alicia. And given what I wrote these past few chapters, you can see why I can't answer the question.

Caster796

Great chapter as usual. I had some questions I wanted to ask. A few chapters ago I asked if certain characters were romantic candidates for Archer and what criteria you used to decide who he might be with. Afterall, almost every major character that archer has met now has some significant personal investment in him. However, I can understand why you did not answer those questions. Part of the fun of this fic is the mystery and speculation of how the various romances may develop. Take last chapter for example. I was genuinely surprised that Alicia emerged as a serious romantic candidate for Archer. I knew that given the nature of the source material and who the protagonist is, it was always possible that something may happen between them but I did not expect that things would progress to that point, at least not before things developed between Archer and others. However, I can appreciate for what it brings to the story. It represents a milestone for both Alicia and Archer. Alicia may be able to eventually get over her aversion of men now that she has found one she can trust and cherish. Meanwhile, Archer has been shown that even if things start on a very bad note, it is possible to be able to turn things around with people, providing another source of hope. The incident may also push other plotlines forward with Prim, Maia, Brynn, Claudia, Celestine, and Olga when and not if the others find out. Finally, it will be interesting to see any future interactions between Alicia and Archer. Their dynamic would be an interesting one given that Alicia is still idealistic, stubborn, and emotional with Archer being more reserved, sarcastic, and pragmatic. Plus I wonder how she will handle others seeking Archer's attention. So I won't ask who makes the final cut or for you to elaborate on your decision process. However, I would like to ask again if you have a plan in place for who Archer ends up with, or is it something you are still ironing out. A simple yes or no is alright and it is fine if you do not want to answer.


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