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Insurrection - Patreon Early Release

🕑 Added 2022-09-14 13:33:01 +0000 UTC

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Sarah Hawke

No problem! You can also bundle them all and send me a message if you want. Glad you enjoyed it! I think we caught one of those but not the other two! So I'll put together new versions soon. :)

James Garrett

Also, sorry if this is considered spam, I have never been good with social etiquette and that extends to social media as well :).

James Garrett

pg 171 "legs when I landed, by my powers absorbed the impact" -> "...but my powers absorbed the impact"

James Garrett

pg 165 "the woman beneath me, and what was exactly I did" -> "...that was exactly what I did"

James Garrett

pg 159 "clearly meant even word" -> "clearly meant every word"

James Garrett

Loved it. Super fun. I think the dialogue is great, the suspense palpable, and the characters just keep getting better. I truly enjoyed this. Because I can't help myself, here are a couple of typos I found -

James Garrett

Yay! Can't wait to read this! Thanks!


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