Sarah Hawke
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Insurrection: Ch 1-3 Preview
🕑 Added 2022-07-25 04:19:22 +0000 UTCHey, guys!
Here is the promised preview for Insurrection!
Be sure to let me know what you think here or in Discord!
Comments
Sarah Hawke
I'll make a note! There were a few other minor things as well
James Garrett
Two quick grammatical items I noted were on pg 28 "casual liaisons hold no appear for me" (appeal) and pg 31 "and I had personally foot on three" (set foot). There was one other minor one I noted to myself but forgot to write down but it was a missing "a" or something small.
James Garrett
I really enjoyed this! I like the backstory for Ash and Kal. Very nicely done. The story moves along very smoothly and I think your writing is excellent. I look forward to the next chapters!
