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3.20 T
🕑 Added 2017-10-03 14:27:10 +0000 UTCAnd thus, we draw the story to a close. (10,500 Words)
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Comments
Sean Coker
This is definitely one of the best bits of the series. I teared up pretty bad. With a bit of editing it would be an amazing short-story in it's own right.
John Koor
You mean undead, right?
You are using this to teach toren whats empathy and love, aren't ya? Toren is learning why people react in certain ways.
Paul Millsted
Heart wrenching, some people just deserve better and its such a gut punch when it gets snatched away from them.
Nicholas Guyett
That was heartbreaking. I wanted the girl to live and enjoy reclaiming her humanity. But what happened instead made more sense. That storyline was incredibly powerful and you should be proud of how you weaved all of those intersecting stories together and enriched the depth of this world and its people.
AKi1red
Toren is dead to me
Parker Groseclose
An amazing conclusion, you continue to surpass all your previous chapters with ease. I can't wait for Saturday!
AKi1red
And now im tearing up n u hate u
