John Louis
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Chapter Two Early Access Release (11/14/25)
🕑 Added 2025-11-15 02:14:58 +0000 UTCHello everybody!
Chapter Two of I, the Unbroken One has finished preliminary editing and is now ready for paid Patreon early access, available to $5 tier or higher. It is 65,000 words total and all placeholders have been filled in.
Please make me aware of any bugs, typos, or other coding errors by either sending me a private message or leaving a comment on this post. All other forms of feedback are of course welcome as well.
The demo will release publicly next Friday (11/21/25).
I hope you enjoy!
Comments
John Louis
Cold Elya can't be convinced, and I think it's best that way. But perhaps more proactive options might fit. Not sure what they'd be, though
Sujan Dhakal
Admittedly telling some random jailer the prince is thinking about offing himself is not the smartest move in the world, but as it is, we don't really have any other options to be proactive about maybe trying to keep a better eye on him while you're on March. It doesn't even need to have to work, but the PC does absolutely nothing about it and doesn't think about him at all beyond the conversation with Elya. It also seems like cold Elya can't be convinced to bring him at all?
Kevin Zhou
Huge
