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Veil - Comic Release

🕑 Added 2025-01-22 18:03:39 +0000 UTC

Comments

Kiptoe

Amazing! Thanks for sharing! I love how you chopped up the panels in dynamic and unique ways, and allowed the visuals to speak for themselves with the text supplying enough info to guide our imaginations further. And the backgrounds as well, like the colored borders of the pages are great with the different gradients, and the grunge texture over it all. A true work of love. I hate to be that guy but I noticed just two things: Page 6 - has his black pupil on the wrong eye compared to the other pages. Page 15 - has a typo in the text where it says "put your through" instead of "put you through". Just two tiny things I noticed when reading the book a couple times, in case you wanted to fix it before printing or whatever. I love the way you've written it and how the characters speak, the main godly sun figure having such a presence even in her manner of speech. I think page 12 is my favorite, with her eyes at the bottom contrasted with the golden people in the middle of the page. So juicy. Thanks for sharing the whole thing with us! Cant wait for more StarVeil!!

Charlie Utting

Holy fuck balls Batman, this is wicked gorgeous and delightful to read. Huge congrats.

Cirilla

Amazing stuff as usual! Will you be printing this yourself and then selling it later on as a short comic, referring to the printer comment?

D4RK

Absolutely beautiful work, thankyou for sharing ♥️

Jordi Alcala

This should be in a gallery, every page is an art piece.

Destry Cloud

Hell yeah, dude. This kicks ass. Mission accomplished in making a comic where every panel feels like a grandiose painting, and the story makes me so stoked for more Starveil

JJcanvas

Absolutely gorgeous Dave. You're a damn beast and a huge inspiration! Cheers and thank you for sharing!

Alfred Manzano

Ohhhh ok.

Genesis Bayo

This should be an animated movie!

David Rapoza

importing from China from our printers would end up being super expensive

Alfred Manzano

I am not aware of this China tariff thing? How is this effecting the comic???

Alfred Manzano

Hell yea Dave!

YoPotato

What a pleasure to see the final comic. Thanks for posting this Dave!

Rauv_Art

Wow.

Marcello Iozzoli

Wow amazing work as always!!!

V

This is beautiful! Call me a softie but I teared up a little at the end, it really resonated with me. Pages 14 and 15 are my absolute favorites their radiance is so striking and magic feels very tactile and mystical. Lettering looks great as well, it really compliments the whole aesthetic. Thank you so much for sharing it Dave, can't wait to have it on my bookshelf!