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1118 - War of Establishment in Stasis

🕑 Added 2024-09-11 15:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Craxuan

I'm guessing it was too much to hope that they can lure their enemies in before activating the shields, which would allow them to annihilate the forces they trapped and reduce the enemy's numbers a tad.

Warden

Thanks, fixed! =)

Specter

Thank you! Maybe: Looking at his assembled party, Leon said, “This is the last moment you have to back down and join those defending the valley. If you have any reservations about joining me on this mission, this is your last chance to back down.” -> switch one of the "back down"s to "opt out” or other equivalent?

Betareader007

Excited for how the next 10 chapters are going to progress.


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