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1197 - A Fan's Request

🕑 Added 2025-03-14 15:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Warden

Thanks, both errors fixed! =)

Kyle

I can't wait for the Games to start. I hope Leon's mom gets eyes on him and makes some assumptions about the lack of Artorias. It's a little heart-wrenching seeing her certainty that she's going to reunite with him every time we get her POV. A couple of errors I noticed: "You’re not going to just walk up to them and announce themselves, are you?" "themselves" -> "yourself" "But he is not the Prince of Flame, with all that entails—and possibly more..." The "not" should probably be removed here, or changed to "now".

Bryn Thomas

Thanks for the chapter!


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