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Going Off the Rails Chapter 1 Final Version (I mean it this time!)

🕑 Added 2026-02-07 23:21:18 +0000 UTC

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FormVIEnthusiast

I feel that, when I first read the last draft I was convinced it was DC comics, and that they'd landed near Doomsday, after reading about bone spikes and a giant apex predator. It wasn't until they started arguing about the jungle dangers that I realized I was wrong

David Ross

I think I saw Blaise's gender switch midway through the HP segment... Otherwise this was very good!

vimesenthusiast

Corrected. Thanks!

vimesenthusiast

Yes. Hence the buzzing.

vimesenthusiast

You're right. Will correct.

incubusfox

I thought it was Rookwood that was in the DoM, but I can't say I remember much about Doholov

Delphinous

so far, very awesome. i guess to me, from what it sounds like, the force in the past was a 2D line, stretching from dark to light, and people moved up and down the spectrum. instead, now that it's changed, an new axis has been added, it's now a 2D plane, with one axis being dark-light and who knows what the other axis is

Christian E. Y.

I did not expect Star Wars but I’m okay with it. I really thought they were in a jungle setting in D&D

Aaron Orr

Second Paragraph: He'd proudly worn (not warned) the robes of a Death Eater. Fourth Paragraph: It's Knockturn Alley. Also, Steam Engines don't hoot, they typically use steam exhaust for a loud whistle and also have bells.