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Hermione's Review...

🕑 Added 2024-11-13 16:21:16 +0000 UTC
Hermione's Review...

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If giving feedback was an art, you'd be a master. As always, I appreciate your feedback. But yeah, I admit... there's that part of me that wants to clap back and "he, whose name I shall not speak." But I know I'd be feeding into his need for attention, and by doing that.. I'd be taking time away from creating content which hurts all of us. But yeah, I'm going to ignore him from here on in. Anyhow, as for the other comment. I won't lie, sometimes I do doubt myself as a creator. Not that I need validation, but when the only comments I get, or majority is of people complaining about dialogue and music. Because I'll admit, I am sensitive to sound, and when I view other people's work and there's no background sound. Just the individual sounds, which has their own background feed and there's just straight silence in between each sound, it actually drives me insane because the sounds aren't organic to the scene. I need the music to drown out the inorganic feel of each sound effect, to kinda glue it all together. Then again, people will complain regardless. No matter how good I think the AI is, and I honestly don't think it sounds soulless computer TTS as the person above says, but I've seen videos of people complaining because they didn't like the voice acting in other creators' videos, or they complain the captions are distracting. People even complaining about music in content that's straight up labelled as HMV's... Hentai Music Videos... Even in Ellie and the Cole Train.... people left comments wanting a reupload without Cole talking. As soon as the sexy time starts, he had at most four lines!! Maybe I should start putting it in the disclaimer. I do think the rule34 community is a lot more toxic than regular porn communities. There's so many artists and creators in the Rule 34 space that quit, and everyone is always like... "I wonder why they quit, their stuff was good." I think in due part is because you'll see a lot more negative feedback, not even constructive criticism, just toxic negativity. Much like in the way that "He, whose name I shall not speak of" comments. He says his kink is to be that way, which I agree is weird. But I do think many more are like him. Anyhow, I always appreciate the way you give feedback. And yes, BLACKED To The Max with Max and Chief Sajanto... that was perfect. I think I found the right balance of dialogue and when to let the music cook. Because I'll admit, I enjoy letting the music cook too. Then after the music had its moment to cook, come back to how the character is feeling, what she's thinking. Or even Warren, how he's perceiving it. But yeah, I understand monsters ain't your thing and that's totally okay. I'm still going to have more human x human content. I'd say 70/30 in that favor. I did cut down in the monologue in the Hermione video though, mainly because I was rushing to get it done. But now that I'm back working on BLACKED To The Max, I'll be putting a lot of emphasis on the narration again.

Sajanto

First of all, I agree that you should just ignore responses that are obviously geared at provoking you, as with the lower of the two examples you posted above. I know it's tough to just let it pass by, but giving these people attention will usually just motivate them to keep provoking you in the future as they find satisfaction in doing just that (and said person even explicitly told you/us publicly some time ago that this very thing is a kink of his - weird enough...). Now to the actual critique: Even though I paid little attention to the Hermione project to be honest as I'm not into monster stuff at all (meaning: that has nothing to do with your execution in the slightest), when referring to your other recent projects I did very much enjoy the amount of dialogue. I would even go as far as to say that I like it just as much as the "actual" erotic content, sometimes even more as it adds so much depth to the scene. Some time ago I said something along the lines of (exact wording might differ slightly): "If I want to watch two people railing each other and nothing more, I might just watch any random porn out there". Your work however isn't just any "random porn", but a very well-crafted animation you put a lot of work into to make the storytelling and by now even the lore (yes, smut videos with FUCKING LORE!!! That's a novelty for sure, but a welcome one – as Palpatine would say. :P ) very convincing and thus giving the project a level of authenticity that is pretty much unheard of in the entire bandwidth of smut animation content. :) Now for the music part, I like adding some music here and there, especially when it adds to the storytelling (AI lyrics and such), but I remember when you first tried to use that feature it was a little "overbearing" compared to actual dialogue, but as you tuned it down in later iterations I think now it is at an appropriate level. Actual dialogue should be way more important, but music can give the scenes an extra layer that adds to the atmosphere. In conclusion, I would stick to the route you're taking when it comes to dialogue because if it were any less it would definitely lack something that was particularly endearing about the content you create. Of course, when I think that something is "too much" or "too little" or there is something I personally do not enjoy (but many might disagree, as with monster stuff, so that shouldn't tailor your decisions by default), I'm open to tell you. Knowing how much effort you put into your videos and the quality you deliver I would never dare to "force" you into decisions or even downright bad-talk about it. Instead, I'd like to give you alternative ideas here and there and whether you integrate them or not is entirely up to you and doesn't make me think any less of your work or yourself. :) I hope I could give you some insight that might be helpful and please keep going with your work as intended (at your appropritae pace of course, so your private life is not infringed). I'm greatly looking forward to the "remake" of episode 2 of Blacked to the Max that will come in the near future. :)

Crossroads Radio

I see what you're saying regarding "corn" theme. It actually took me awhile to get it. But yeah, dialogue adds to the story, and story adds context to the sexy time, which to me... it adds much more spice.

spacewolf198

Keep up the good work. There will always haters. I like it when there is more dialogue, like in what you are doing, so it is not your typical "corn" theme. Story is very important even in erotic art.


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