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💚EPISODE 20💚 (DO NOT REPOST)

🕑 Added 2024-03-23 13:39:30 +0000 UTC

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Anci Bohorquez

I agree with you, you have to relax a little, let the author do her job, she knows what she's doing, a story can involve a thousand things at the same time and little by little it develops, it's just a matter of time, while we enjoy the process of it, getting our conclusions about what happens next, because that makes it even more exciting.

G3emini

👏🏽👏🏽

Sato

Given the plot OP direction is suspenseful it keeps you guessing on that happens next don't get too in depth; just appreciate it for what it is. The tale needs to be driven, and this is one way to accomplish it. I’m sure Freya will redeem herself.

z cool

👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Xeviera Little

That's fine, but at that age girls are self-aware and curious enough to discover what's good for them. That's why I don't understand her.

None None

Hey hey,.... easy on Ellis. It's her first time for everything. 💖

ermCret

Ladies clap your hands for these 🧍🏻‍♀️🧍🏻‍♀️ two clowns🤡 We all know they were joking when they said they were STRAIGHT

Yasmim

the story is excellent❤️

ghostyy

i’m so late but this was so good. poor freya having to go home :( GIRLS YOU ARE NOT STRAIGHT THOUGHH!!

Xeviera Little

Ellis is annoying and so stupid that he doesn't see the obvious signs.

TMD

Freya needs an intervention about consent

SeggyBaka

Hahahahaha, right... Straight...

Maaliyah Buckner

I’m still reading tho I’m really excited and interested to see what the writer does with this story I’m begging you though please stop making Freya do nonconsensual stuff like that I want to believe she’s a good character that just has a lot of issues and trauma like everyone else, someone some of us may relate to but it’s hard to like her when she does stuff to Ellis like that.

Maaliyah Buckner

Bro I’m sad now.. I feel there’s no redeeming Freya… she literally took Elli’s first kiss, touched her body even after Ellis was trying to help her get away from that gross boy. Then Freya turns around and does the same thing, then doesn’t even apologize for it until later and on top of all of that she looked at her undressed all this without her consent. The last one may have been an accident but the other two are still really bad imagine if that was a boy, we would hate his guts 😔

Ravenna

Idk to me it felt more like Freya coming up with an excuse to match Ellis. She seems like the type of person to do so anyways.

Anci Bohorquez

From Freya's expression you can see that it was not a pleasant experience for her, and that she harbors some resentment. Hopefully we will see later what really happened, since she was even crying when she received the kiss.

Ashley Arias

She is NOT straight 😭😭 I feel a slow burn here!

Ravenna

Freya's step sister totally went for her, too bad, that would have been a hilarious ship and interesting. Hopefully she'll show up in the story someday.

ermCret

LOLL

ermCret

NONONO THEY CANT HAVE A MISUNDERSTANDING LIKE BTD ITS GOING TO TAKE AWHILE TO FIND THAT FREYA LIKES ELIS😭

Yolanda Foley

Idk about them being straight lol but omg thank you, i am loving this story!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!

Alejandra

I hope is after Ellis and Freya start going out and trust each other, because right now both are in denial. Ellis thinking she is straight when she literally dreamed about Freya in her bed kissing her 🙄 and Freya I don’t even know if she is in denial or what, because she obviously likes Ellis, she literally ask her if she have her consent if she could kiss her again 😩

Alejandra

Freya is straight as me 🤣 seriously, just accept the rainbow 🏳️‍🌈

Anci Bohorquez

And equally, if it's her stepsister it's a sign that there's a lot of drama coming for Freya and Ellis, I have a feeling she's just coming to create drama and problems😭

none

Eita eita 🤯

Alejandra

Hopefully is the stepsister, I thought it was the stepmother and that will make it even worse 😩

Xana

Hetero de Taubaté

Anci Bohorquez

Wait, is she Freya's stepsister? which was talked about a few chapters ago, I don't know why I suspect it is her, since her stepmother said she couldn't be with them because she had studies abroad I also deduced that it could be her because of her blonde hair like her mother's (Or do you imagine it could be the stepmother? that would be crazy hahaha) I want to see what's next. Heterosexual? Yes, of course you don't even believe it yourself hahaha, thanks again for bringing us this great story💖