A Blemish on the Curve, Chapter 29 (Complete)
🕑 Added 2023-06-29 08:49:07 +0000 UTCHey everyone! It's finally here! I've been wo
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Joyce Julep
Thanks Jona! A lot more is on the way! <3
Jona
Loving the reset of the story and already it's completely spiralled out of Lucas' control. Can't wait to see more!
Joyce Julep
Aww, thanks so much for saying so, House Gnome! I really appreciate your kind words, and am very happy you're enjoying the story. It's gonna go soooo much deeper <3
House Gnome
This was so well done, I too love how you used intelligence as another form of dominance over the Male character, I think this is my favorite story of yours currently. Can't wait to see what the ramifications will be of this and how the Color choice is worked into the story going forward.
Joyce Julep
Thanks CW! I'm so happy you liked the intelligence gain/domination trope. It's one of my favorites to depict, because it's always such a nice, slow burn...until all of a sudden it just gets out of control XD
Joyce Julep
Mmmm, that's lovely to hear ;)
Joyce Julep
Thanks Steve! It's always nice to hear that you've enjoyed the chapter! <3
CW Moss
Incredibly hot chapter. I always love the intelligence gain & dominance thing. And you used this the with the size and power play with brilliant finesse. Very well thought out.
stevebasic
Amazing return to form. This thing goes to eleven lol.
hehe
I got chills..10/10