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The Abatement of Kyle Trinter, Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2023-01-26 01:45:19 +0000 UTC

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Jona

The suspense of finding out Martha's intentions with inviting his parents over is so great. I'm surprised she even let him dress in his regular clothes but I suspect it's building to an even bigger humiliation after all of the denial leading up to dinner time. Really looking forward to how dinner will play out!

stevebasic

Fantastic chapter. You do a great job of making Kyle’s ambiguity - does he like this new life or not? - so viscerally real. Like- he could have just screamed “get me out of here!” to his parents when they arrived at the door, but something inside himself kept him from doing so. Good work.


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