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Chapter 79: Invincible

🕑 Added 2024-05-02 11:39:40 +0000 UTC

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Benjamin Collins

Tftc I see where you where going for an emotional point in your story and it's pretty good 👍 You also however have a very distinct tone to this whole story that I think is gonna be way to hard to get rid of for anything really all that emotional. The tone is basically, " don't worry be happy now" it's very relaxed upbeatish easily read. The tone just screams no matter what you read at any given point, don't worry it's gonna end up ok , which makes any kind of emotional situation a lot less emotional

Gue

Tftc! Honestly, the world you made here is so nice. =3 I know the focus of the story is on the crafting classes but was wondering how the magic classes behave, like wizards. I think I remember them being mentioned at some point. The idea has me wanting to make a fanfic of a magical bard being plonked into the world. XD

Lyncher98

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