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Chapter 59: Trying

🕑 Added 2024-04-17 20:43:23 +0000 UTC

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Caiban

The longer chapter the more reading fun ^^ But not if it gets to much for you or we dont get our daily dose of boba ;) Btw i blame you for my new addiction to boba xD

Guessed

Good chapter! Two things I'd change: '“Haha, yes, but that’s actually not what I want them for here. [...]' you could replace the "haha" with something like "Arthur barked out a laugh, "yes, but[...]' and "Stew takes too much water, unless you were camping directly by a source." isn't having Mizu around sort of like having a portable dowsing rod, if not actually a portable water source?

Nathaniel Jacob moore

Mizu's mind doing the gutter crawl smh xD how old are they again? Considered adults I remember but exact age I don't, seems demon society might be a little prudish if they've been dating for a few months and that's the reaction xD That or Mizu got excited embarrassed and Arthur is more oblivious than even he thinks >.>

WhyNot42

Long or short, I’m grateful but - this chapter was pure happiness from beginning to end

R.C. Joshua

Yeah - took another look at the paragraph and rephrased it to be more clear.

Lyncher98

Tftc

LegosFreak

Is the second to last paragraph supposed to be lily laughing instead of Mizu?


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