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Construction Mage - Chapter 46: Viscous

🕑 Added 2025-07-08 02:22:21 +0000 UTC

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Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter

Brian Chrostowski

As much as Clay regretted not listening to his foreman friend enough, he still held on to the belief that he wasn’t entirely wrong/, either/. In a panic, he hefted the [what did he heft] next to him, ready to swing down on the monster, but the sound of the acid burning away at the ground made him hesitate. I can’t believe I was writ[h]ing and squirming around on the ground for so long before he told me! After a minute of internally cursing the newcomer, Clay finally settled down as he took up. - not sure what you are trying to say at the end of the sentence, stood up...?

mbncd

"He then started meditating right away, seeing how starting early would not increase his summon’s uptime, but also net him valuable levels from using the skill in combat against higher-level foes." I think you mean "not only" rather than just "not" there. "In a panic, he hefted the next to him, ready to swing down on the monster, but the sound of the acid burning away at the ground made him hesitate." You're missing a noun after "hefted". What did he heft? "I can’t believe I was writing and squirming around on the ground for so long before he told me!" I think you mean "writhing". And lastly, the next chapter link isn't in place yet despite there being 2 more chapters out after this one already.


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