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Chapter 136 - Junior Sister Fuyu

🕑 Added 2025-10-20 08:41:33 +0000 UTC

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Emperor Cat VI

Thanks for sharing that. And yeah that's on me, my skills as an author are not living up T.T The story has slowed down, but it needs to to set up what happens in the next arc. Some new characters need to be introduced, fleshed out, the main cast need some power ups and more importantly, problems and payoffs!

Tryptic

This is one of the best cultivator stories I've read, with clear goals, carefully designed abilities, and fantastic characters. But in the last 10 chapters or so, the rate of interesting story progression to word count has fallen off a cliff. Nothing that has happened feels like it will affect the story going forward, as if it's all just skippable. The last 3 chapters combined have about 10 sentences worth of content that seems like it'll be relevant later. And not just that, it feels like the author wants us to pay attention to these details but isn't planning to recall them. Like being asked to care about the world details by someone who doesn't care that much themselves.

Emperor Cat VI

That should be peddler haha

Ron Jarrell

a travelling paddler — is that a guy who goes around looking to hire on to row boats?


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