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A small update!

🕑 Added 2023-01-30 10:28:39 +0000 UTC

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SitriAbyss

It's up and ready to go, but I will need at least two more days to finish the rest of what I planned.

SitriAbyss

Thank you very much for liking it. I will first do the voting for the penalties of round 5 in a few days. Then, if everything goes well I think I can continue in March.

J

Eagerly awaiting the next update

freier

When will you continue with the Game Night ? I think this is the best story that exists of this kind, good job.

SitriAbyss

Thank you :)

SitriAbyss

Yes, you're right. These are the things that's in my mind and will try to change. And don't worry, i'm grateful for constructive criticism, and that you really like what I do here, it means a lot :)

Wyndon

Looking back at some of your work for not so long ago, it does seem like you’ve just gotten so wrapped up in characters. I personally love this style of creating, but I understand that it is not as productive. The best example to compare is ‘The Center of Attention’ with ‘The Supermodel!’. While their stories are different, one is significantly shorter than the other, yet they both leave the same impact. So in short, all you really need to do is condense your scripts down a little. A story with 50-70 pages is going to be finished a lot quicker and released in much shorter batches than one with 110-220 pages. It will allow you more time to focus on quality over quantity (although I never think your quality goes down ;) Something a learned is that an audience understands more than you think they do, so unnecessary dialogue is always going to bloat a story when the audience can figure it out themselves! That’s just coming from someone who is experimenting with storytelling, and someone who is a fan of your work. Please take this as nothing more than constructive Criticism! I’ll always love your work!!

SitriAbyss

And if you read what I write here, the link in this post is empty because the comic is not done yet. It's for those who don't want to renew their pledge for February if I can't finish it in time. The comic will be uploaded to that link so they can read it despite ending their support.

SitriAbyss

As Felix said, the game night was updated a week ago. I added new pages and PDF to it. https://www.patreon.com/posts/game-night-round-77294187

Felixfalck

It's already up. Sitri just updated the latest upload to include the remaining images iirc

Bal tha mele

Any update is a good update from you Sitri 🥰


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