LopaPhi
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Dev log #24
🕑 Added 2025-09-17 21:31:03 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
How've you all been? First of all, sorry if the dev log's late. I didn't want to post it yet until I had some good news to share. And good news I sure have! The chapter's finally done! Both script and renders.
Though it still needs to go through three hoops. Greenscheme is now in the middle of editing and giving suggestions to make the dialogue feel more alive. After that, it'll be sent for proof reading and testing. And once that's finally done, give it to the translators for some translatin'!
After all that's checked, I'll post a release dates, so look forward to that.
In the mean time, my work's still not done yet. I'll be revising the previous chapters to fix all spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes missed. Then add bgm's and sfx into the game.
Anyway, chapter currently has 43k words, 1650 images, and 18 animations. This isn't final though as it's still gonna go through proof reading and editing. It's quite a wordy and story heavy chapter if I do say so myself. Hope you'll all enjoy it once it's out. Shouldn't be much longer now.
I'll send a chapter 3 poster soon. Something similar to what I did for chapter 2 :).
And that's it for now. I'm gonna go hit the sack as I still need to wake up for work in a few hours. But before that, thank you all for being here. It makes me feel incredibly lucky and happy to know that what I'm making is worth your time. :)
Like always, my DM's are open so feel free to DM away.
Thank you!
LopaPhi
Comments
DanDann
Good work man. I want you to know that you are a very talented script writer!
Dogemba
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笑貝
I really want to compliment your skill in creating this text-based game. Your writing is incredibly solid—without relying on flashy language, every word feels precisely chosen, making it a genuine pleasure to read. What I admire most are your characters; their dialogues are so authentic and natural. With just a few lines, you bring a vivid personality to life, making them feel like real people I might know. The plot development is also masterfully handled. The pacing is perfect, the logic is clear, and every setup and twist holds up under scrutiny, allowing me to become fully immersed in the story, thinking and making choices alongside the characters. You never resort to forced melodrama or preaching, yet through your solid storytelling, you create a deep sense of resonance and enjoyment. This is truly special, and I'm already looking forward to your next story
