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Do you like this design for my merch?
🕑 Added 2019-04-22 16:05:35 +0000 UTCThese are the initial designs I got back from one designer (check the attachments as well!). I decided to reach out to multiple designers and will be on a 1-2 week wait with most of them to get any sort of designs back.
I want to feel in love with the designs, and equally feel like the important messages are being spread thoughtfully. I don't feel that yet, honestly...
Dave's thought on Comet's concept is that it should be more cartoony and goofy with maybe his eyes being exaggerated largely about staring at his feet.
I'm personally feeling a little stuck with not falling straight in love with all the designs. I did try to push for a male and female version so the line doesn't lend itself to being too girly...
Since you guys are helping me create this merch line, I would really value your input. Especially if you know of a designer whom you think could do a good job representing this brand. I've even considered having an art contest!
So my questions to you guys...
- Do you like any of these designs? If so, which ones? If not, why not?
- Do you have a designer in mind that you might recommend?
- What type of merch are you most interested in? (totes, clothing, mugs, artwork, etc.)
I'm looking forward to hearing from you guys and having it help me find a sense of direction with this.
Comments
Jennifer Perez
I think it would look good in spring colorslike white, sky blue, lime green, pink, etc.
Meaghan Beverage
yes better
Meaghan Beverage
yes a little better
BirdTricks
Yes, I did think about that but wasn't sure how to go about it! Wendy suggested the same thing (our customer service) so I am going to show her the concepts and see if she can help me out with starting up a contest.
Chris Cairns
Just a random thought. Have you thought about asking for "fan art". Have like a kinda contest? You reach so many people. There's bound to be a few who can draw (I, however, struggle with stick men).
BirdTricks
Thanks, Jodi!
BirdTricks
Agreed, and it is a big deal you can make the association quickly... will keep looking for more designs!
BirdTricks
Did you think the more realistic one was any closer? "thumbnail7" file?
BirdTricks
Thanks!
BirdTricks
Do you think you'd like it if the tank wasn't pink? I'm wondering if that's why I like that one.
BirdTricks
Yeah, I think he will end up in charge of the men's line/designs because I struggle there. Pink and girly and I'm like awww I like it so much... and then 50% of my audience is like grumble... ha!
BirdTricks
Gosh, it would be cool to find a training pouch I could customize for sure.
Caroline Donald
You are so welcome! Just a suggestion - the Adventures of Roku channel has artwork that is cartoonish but beautiful- maybe he might put you in touch with his artist?
Jodi
I LOVE the ones with the greenery "it's never too late" and the other one. I like the color and added background.
BirdTricks
I agree, thanks for the feedback!
BirdTricks
I feel the same and I think I like the main one BECAUSE of the pink shirt... which is a scary thought if there's only white or black available or something, you know? So I will definitely keep searching and trying different designers and styles. Thank you for taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback!
Caroline Donald
Ok, a couple of honest thoughts... I don't ABSOLUTELY LOVE any of them. The one I do like the best is the first pink one, but I think the bird needs to be bigger and more detailed! The ones with bookmatched birds and foliage, to me the foliage overpowers the bird and writing and it looks too fussy. And the geometric ones -to me- look a bit lifeless. You want vibrant, freedom, fun! I would wear any of these but I honestly think you haven't found the right match yet. All the best!
Chloe
I LOVE the main pic. The geometric design is really appealing, it’s classy enough for daily wear, the text is the right combination of in-joke and inspirational. I think the first design has a lot of class and heart. Same for the ones with the mirrored amazon and mirrored Comet — aesthetically pleasing, interesting, inspiring. I find the last two designs (with the B/W background) to be the least interesting / appealing out of the bunch. I don’t like that Comet’s gorgeous long tail is so obviously cut out of the images, and I just find the combination of a monochromatic background and a really busy foreground to be a lackluster choice. I hear what Dave is saying with something cartoony, but.... I would not wear something that was too cartoony/goofy. It would make me feel kinda childish and the message would be lost IMO. I think an art contest is a very cool idea, and if nothing else it would get some creative juices flowing for y’all in terms of what resonates. I’m most looking forward to merch that spreads your message — shirts, totes — but I love a good mug, too.
Stacey Bedsole
The first one is my favorite, I also think the last one with Comet looking at his feet could be cartoonish. I laugh every time he spaces out on his feet.
Wendy Cottingham
Honestly I don't look at this and think Comet. I don't want to sound rude but just my opinion. I think a goofy cartoon of Comet is a really cute idea!! I think selling training pouches is a great idea! You well find that artist that clicks with you.
Meaghan Beverage
they are all good but i think comet's face needs to be more comet like
Chris Cairns
I love this. Im personally not into wearing peoples names etc but this is something I would wear. My favourite is thumbnail 3 or the main pic
Jennifer Perez
My favorite is the main photo (pink tank top). I like that design the best.
Callie DeFore
Love it! I will definitely will get one. The thing is I don’t think men would wear it. Like what Dave likes with the cartoon, men will prefer that. I don’t know how all men feel, but my husband prefers Dave’s idea. But I REALLY love this.
Nina Mayer
Love the geometric pattern and I think it would be great on mugs and totes. Even training pouches or bird accessories. But I love the art!!
