Live Die Waifu 10
🕑 Added 2025-12-04 04:19:26 +0000 UTCThe time loop fic got kommissioned!
Part 1 of 2.
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Comments
Meudon
Edits topaz that shown with -> shone by gems in her -> the gems and while all of you are likely experts ... but -> remove either "while" or "but"
Steven Stiring
So, I'm guessing L and Mel (hey they are alphabet buddies!) will need to be completely broken in some way before they can be rebuild into something the rest of the group can trust. That or you're just going to keep them as the social antagonists for the story while Q would be the physical antagonist.
William H
"Captain Mel" should be Captain Mal.
William H
"First movie advantage" should be first move advantage
GAMB42
Always amusing to see a Lee variant operating without fucks to give.
Arri
This story is so interesting, but that could be because I love cultivation systems on the Swords & Sorcery scale. Mostly. The focus on the character's interactions because everything else around them is much the same every loop Great update!
Alice
Recently read this fic can't wait for more of it, still also looking forward to getting back to the usual cycle. I know we have another 2 commissions to go and I want to read them too I guess I just want more writing and I'm enjoying what I'm reading.