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§128 Meet-Up

🕑 Added 2026-01-26 20:00:08 +0000 UTC

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melchi

Thanks for the chapter

PatronTurtle

Even if they have something to prove, ignoring available resources and information seems really stupid. Prove yourself by winning

CJ Holmes

"Not now." Fixed. This is why authors can't do their own line editing. We already know what the words are supposed to be.

CJ Holmes

Her name is Meltissa Jane. Curator Jane, if someone is using her title. If people are getting confused, then it might be worth some small revisions.

Eli Loeb

""Now now." Eterine's word was so final" Is it supposed to be "Now now." or "Not now."?

Julien

« Meltissa returned after she sent her message. » it is Jane that sent the message, no?

CJ Holmes

When Taylor was a legate, he had one of the township's tablets. He's no longer official, so he doesn't have that access.

Michael T

I thought Jane still had Taylor's phone number (or whatever) - didn't they used to text each other all the time? (Also, is it supposed to be Meltissa in the penultimate line, or someone else?)

CJ Holmes

Thanks for that. Fixed.

Eddie

"That, and the Oathbreaker title. It makes it hard to gain anyone's trust," he said. "Mariella might have had better luck with them if I weren't there." Don’t think Mariella is the name that is meant to go here.


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