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§111 Rescue

🕑 Added 2025-12-22 20:00:11 +0000 UTC

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CJ Holmes

I think I'll make it clearer and more frightening at the same time. Something like: "Updating my mana inventory." He removed a mana stone, apparently full, and replaced it with an empty one. "If I drain them completely, I should get back an eighth of what I spent today." He looked up from his notebook, thoughtful. "The concept works, but it's not a very efficient transfer. There's definitely room for improvement." "Did you invent this circle?" "Just now," the mask nodded. "Necessity is the mother of invention, and all that. But it is some rough work."

CJ Holmes

Point taken.

CJ Holmes

Do you think he can resist?

Paul Foland

Keeva doesn't get any loot from this fight, but iwonder what having the smiling man gang as garden decorations is going to do for Keeva's reputation or for that matter Tylers.

Brian P.

As an aside, this line is silly imo: Her intuition whispered warnings about this child. The lady just saw this kid warp a bunch of people way more powerful than her or her people without missing a beat and then start placing powerful objects around. It’s not intuition to be wary of someone who just launched an RPG at your courtyard and pulled out an assault rifle, that’s just basic observation.

Caleb Reusser

Except that Grandma doesn't seem to care about him as a person but rather an asset that she lost out on and is trying to swing to her camp.

Eli Loeb

Is Taylor going to be experimenting with and learning soul magic?

PatronTurtle

I think it's the Emperor. These 4 are probably hired as assassins or kidnappers for political hostages occasionally

A P

I like that the Grandma, given how competent they have been shown at spreading their influence, is actually a competently rational/intellectual person who is introspective enough to apologize and make amends, even if maybe she could have done so sooner. Granted, it seems like the kind of attitude necessary in such a setting, where power is largely individual, and so an individual can shoot up in power unexpectedly and be a threat (even if still often tied down politically to a faction that helped level them up and train them). I actually like her family, it's one of the rare depictions I've seen of skill in governance and politicking win out over brute force in the long term. That focus is a big win for them in an empire in decline, though that might reverse if the other races can start getting classes and they don't have their own territory to govern.

A P

Given this is from Keeva's perspective, and so it's not necessary for Taylor to make himself clear to her, I still think this is a little too ambiguous: "'Mana inventory,' he told her. 'I should get back an eighth of what I spent today, if these numbers are right.'" Is "mana inventory" meant to convey: an assay, a test; that he is storing/recovering mana; he is checking the mana of their personal inventory; he is measuring his mana use against theirs; he is checking what type/kind of mana they are using inside or is being used by the spatial effect? If it's the first, a test, I'd word it as "a mana inventory", as in he is performing a mana inventory, which sounds like the kind of actuarial language he might use with her that she would understand, but in a scientific sense towards the magic phenomenon.

Brian P.

Okay, so my bet: The patron Silas and the Aubergs share is going to be the next primary antagonist. Someone powerful enough that not even powerful noble families want to piss them of, capable of getting tier 4 magicians on their payroll, connected enough that a royal princess contacted them for a job/favor and amoral enough that they accepted.

Alton V

A good sandwich would sway me easily.

Adam Danielson

TYFTC

PatronTurtle

I'm glad that his Grandma is finally seeing sense. Thought T might have to wipe out the entire House, and that wouldn't have been good for him. There's still a chance for a better wider family


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