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On The Hunt: Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2022-09-14 17:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Robert

Great chapter! I think you did a great job with the Order meeting. It was refreshing to see that even though they are members of a vigilante group to try and end the threat of Voldemort, many of them still act as the majority of the British Wizarding world. Expecting Dumbledore or Harry to save them and do all the fighting and be the saviors. Glad Harry gave them some hard truths. The duel scene was perfect. Even with all his magical ability and spell knowledge, Harry still needs to improve and not underestimate enemies. Better to learn now then when it could be in an actual fight to the death. Eagerly anticipating the meeting between Sirius and Cyrus as well as Harry and Daphne. Based on how you’ve portrayed Harry’s personality so far I’m hoping he is level headed about any potential betrothal talks knowing about the dual lordship, Gabrielle as Lady Potter and Daphne as Lady Black I am assuming is the eventual outcome Thanks for the update!


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