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Moving Forward: Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2024-02-12 17:56:05 +0000 UTC

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Coady

Well. The wards around the house that Dumbledore was always so concerned about certainly didn't do much to protect the house or the Dursleys.

Krish

Yeah, that is one of the future plot points I'm heading toward.

Robert

Great update! Well done battle scene. I don’t understand Kingsley though. He fought in the first war against Greyback and knows how dangerous he is and what the him and the rest of his pack were doing. Why would he not use lethal magic to defend himself? Isn’t he a DMLE member first still? They knew they couldn’t do anything against the werewolves successfully why would they even try and intervene. I think there is a lack of logic in some of this. I don’t think Dumbledore would actually rather have his Order members die than kill in self defense. Just something I think you should make clear. I don’t think Dumbledore would be able to keep up the order if he was sending them into situations where they could die repeatedly without being able to defend themselves similarly. It isn’t like Dumbledore never killed in the Great War against Grindelwald previously. The effects of the ritual are interesting here. Dumbledore was neutral towards Harry prior to it and Kingsley seems to be inheriting a negative view towards Harry now. Excited to see how this develops. Cheers!


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