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🕑 Added 2024-05-24 17:14:18 +0000 UTC

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Rodolfo Xavier Pena Valladares

If kick jolie we must at least I hope we can get a better ending and a meaningful resolution for grey, you know like learning that sometimes relationship don't work because people grow and start to want different things in life, and although it is sad and awful it is also a part of life. It's not just betrayal here and betrayal there, which again won't accomplish anything but just convinced him that relationship are not worth it and close his hear by lock and key, making whatever his endgame partner have a much harder time getting him to open up, which is a subplot we were already past, or at least I thought we were. Also, I thought the reason why we(the readers) wanted jolie out and the final partner in it's so we can just concentrate on the main plot which is making movies, so how is repeating the whole cheating, trauma, closed heart narrative going to help trim the romantic subplot. Plus, if we go the pregnancy route, he will have to learn to co parent which will make his future wife have to be mature enough to be chill about it, which will give less drama aka less words given to it you know.

Rodolfo Xavier Pena Valladares

Grrrrgh, okay I already gave my two cents a couple chapters ago and that this not my story, it's Mr. Author's, but I truly hate how cheap the cheating subplot feels. It doesn't progress the characters, grey will just get rekt again with the cheating trauma for nor reason cause most marriages/relationshipa don't even end because of cheating it's like one of the least statistical reasons for it, the thing is that it is most definitely the most dramatic one and easy to gossip, critize, and judge about for other people so it gets overrepresented in media


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