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Magical Spider chapter 11

🕑 Added 2022-05-25 23:14:08 +0000 UTC

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Melisande Peralta

Yes! Daredevil!

Christian Jeffress

Thanks for another great chapter! And honestly, The Teeth is kinda funny lol, and fitting for the guy. Daredevil as a trainer would be awesome! I had Izo be a trainer for my character. Anyway, once again, thanks for the chapter!

Erinnyes

"The Teeth" sounds about like a name a criminal thug would want to call themselves, so to me it works fine. Is it a great name? Of course not, but have you heard nicknames criminals actually give themselves? Professional writers, they are not. I liked Harry's dilemma and how you handled it. It felt realistic for him to battle between his core character and his desire to not be a hero this go around. It makes a lot of sense. Well done.


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