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Emerald Dragon chapter 30

🕑 Added 2022-01-06 16:26:10 +0000 UTC

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Christian Jeffress

Thanks for another excellent and very enjoyable chapter, and like others have said, I think you’re handling progression of Harry and Azula’s relationship incredibly well. You have set it up that she will be a lot more sane with a positive influence in her life, and her being very loyal to that positive influence, and a relationship that can grow in time. Honestly, the story is fantastically fun to read.

Prashast Vats

couldnt agree more my man!!! tho looks lke u had that rant bottled inside for quite a while huh?😂😂

letr1994

I couldn't agree more with Erinnyes. The way you are handling the development, while slow in the number of flash back's, it's beautifully done. Not only are you making Harry have a strong impression on her, but also helping her have a more healthy development as a character herself. Honestly would love having Harry snap at Ursa sometime, be it on a flash back or when they find her again. Ozay is a monster outright, but Ursa always annoyed me in that she gave up on Azula from tha very beginning. I mean sure, unlike Zuko she was a genius which captured their father's and grandfathers attention and pride, but he never care for her, just how she could be useful to each of them, and their legacy's. Iroh was broken after his son and saw they way Zuko was different, and Ursa was worried about him like a mother should, especially in such a dangerous place as the royal court. But both of them saw that Azula hold her father's and grandfather's attention with her abilities, and decided that she was fine, that Zuko need them more, essentially abandoning her to them. And while they ignore her in exchange for Zuko, like all he children she poured herself on those who acknowledged her, doing everything they teach her and ask of her because simply they gave her praises and attention. By the time Ursa and Iroh bother themselves to notice her, she was already following the teachings of her father, because no one else could be bothered to be there for her. So when they finally notice all they saw was Ozai and his teachings, and give up on her, because they feared not the monster she was but the one they could see she would be. Instead of been a wakeup call to try and mitigate Ozai's influence on Azula with their on, they gave up on her, and THAT pissed me off to this day. She was a child, she needed her family more than ever back then, and they just gave up on her like some lost cause, focusing on Zuko, which reinforced Ozai's teachings on her. Azula may have been born with a spark of madness that Ozai feed, but Ursa and Iroh are just as guilty of what she became.


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