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Test chapter for Avatar/HP Xover
🕑 Added 2021-03-08 22:10:47 +0000 UTCA.N: Hi guys, what you see under this message is basically a first draft (as in not what I would post without checking it through and improving it) section of the Avatar/HP crossover. I haven't even looked through this to check for mistakes.
It's not really meant to be a quality chapter, like the title says, this is just a test chapter (not a final product). My plan is to release a test chapter for each option in my poll before it ends. Feel free to read through them and criticse them, give me feedback and tell me what you think.
A.N: Hi guys, what you see under this message is basically a first draft (as in not what I would post without checking it through ) section of the Avatar/HP crossover. I haven't even looked through this to check for mistakes.
But to sum up:
* Don't take this chapter seriously, this is like a rough draft. Look at it and feel free to tell me what was good and what went wrong.
* I'll put up test chapters for the other story options soon/whenever I can.
* Wish me luck on the interview.
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Test chapter:
Aang, Katara and Sokka were getting quite worried. The three of them had one goal at the moment, and that was to escape. As of the moment they were currently on top of a fire nation ship, their escape - Appa, Aang's flying bison - was standing right behind them, however they couldn't yet escape. The reason why was the older, angry looking, pony tailed boy with a scar on his eye. He was clearly a powerful fire bender, and definetly a determined one if the way he was trying to catch Aang was any indication, and if he wasn't trouble enough then add in the fact that he had several other firebender troops standing behind him.
"Give up," Zuko - the previously mentioned angry boy - growled as he and his men stood ready to jump into combat. "if you surrender I won't harm any of you, I'll even let the two water tribe peasents go free." He said, adding the last part to Aang.
Aang paused, Zuko's words echoed in his head. Yes Zuko had been trying to catch him but he had kept his word when they agreed that Aang would come with him in exchange for leaving the water tribe alone. And right now Katara and Sokka were in danger, that was a fact. Aang knew he was a powerful airbender but he was still out matched, Sokka was limited to a boomerang and a club since he wasn't able to bend any elements at all and while Katara was a waterbender, she was not a trained one. Aang supposed they could quickly make a run for it and jump on Appa but that was clearly a bad idea since it was very likely that they would simply shoot them straight back down to the ship. Aang's best bet had been the Avatar state, however he had already used that less than a minute ago, and he was still tired from doing so.
"Aang! No!" Katara quickly said when she saw that Aang was actually considering accepting Zuko's offer.
"Aang, maybe." Sokka said in a weak voice as he looked at the firebenders opposite him. "I was kidding!" He said in a defensive voice when Katara glared at him.
"Do you promise not to hurt them?" Aang asked.
"I won't if you cooperate. You have my word." Zuko nodded.
"I'll do it." Aang said in a solemn voice, Zuko gestured to two of his men who walked forwards towards Aang, both holding spears in their hands.
"Aang, you can't!" Katara replied as she grabbed his arm and attempted to drag him to Appa, only for Aang to stay rooted in the spot where he was standing, refusing to move.
"I have to, Katara." Aang sighed. "Take your brother and go, please." He begged, lowering his head slightly as the two men came closer. Sokka held his club in one hand, his boomerang in the other. His mind was in overdrive as he tried to think of a way to get out of this safely along with Aang and Katara, unfortuantly he wasn't able to come up with anything.
"You don't have to!" Katara said, tears dripping down her face.
"Yes, I do." Aang said with a sad smile when the two men were mere feet away, the trio looked to the men that held their spears defensively, ready to fight back if any of the three try and attack.
"No, back off!" Katara shouted to the two fire nation men as she stepped in front of Aang.
"What are you doing?!" Aaang and Sokka asked at the same time.
"I'm not giving you up without a fight!" Katara said in a determined voice, the two boys exhanged looks, apparently she was willing to ignore the fact that she barely knew how to water bend.
The fire nation men continued moving forwards but were stopped when an air blast sent them flying backwards and landing mere feet away from Zuko.
"That wasn't me!" Aang quickly said when everyone looked at him.
A second later the air around them shifted and someone dropped into view, the air around this new person shifted so it would slow his landing. He laned in-between the fire nation and the trio while a triangle shaped glider landed a short distance behind Appa.
The trio took a good look at the new arrival, he was dressed in black boots, black trousers and a red hooded jacket that appeared to be made of scales, the man's hood was up and his back was facing the trio so they had no idea what he looked like from the front. The fire nation members who were able to take a look at him from the front had actually taken a step back in what looked like fear.
"You?" Zuko breathed out in shock as he looked at the new arrival. "What are you doing here?"
"I am terribly sorry about this, Zuko." The new arrival said in a pained voice just as the two previously thrown fire nation members stood up, no sooner than they had they were sent flying into two other fire nation soldiers thanks to the air blasts that shot out of the stranger's hands.
Zuko growled and sent a fire blast at the stranger, the new arrival easily dealt with it by slapping it away with a back hand, as if he was dealing with a fly, something which only served to enfuriate Zuko who began sending more attacks.
"Avatar," The new arrival called while he continued to block Zuko's attacks, mostly with airbending but sometimes he would strike it away in a way that only a firebender could. "if you want to make your escape then now's the time. You don't have room for one more, do you?"
"Uh...yeah, we do." Aang blinked before he and his friends all jumped up onto Appa, their eyes shifted back towards the stranger.
"Take off, I'm coming!" The stranger said after dodging a particularly powerful fire blast.
"You heard the man, yip-yip!" Sokka quickly called out, Appa grunted before he slapped his tail down and began taking off
"This was fun but I've got to go, see ya Zuko." The stranger said before he waved his hand and a wave of green fire shot out from his palm, the flames headed towards Zuko and crashed onto the ground in front of him, causing the prince and the other fire soldiers to take a step back to avoid getting burnt. The stranger quickly took full advantage of that distraction and turned before he rushed towards Appa, using his air bending to increase his speed.
Appa got into the air, the stranger jumped up and two green jets of fire shot out from under his feet, pushing him upwards so he could land on Appa's saddle.
"Nice bison." The stranger commented, head turned away form them and looking towards the ship that was looking farther and farther away as Appa flew up into the air.
"You...you're a firebender?!" Sokka blurted out in shock.
"And a airbender?" Katara added with a look of pure disbelief.
"But...but that's impossible." Aang whispered to himself.
"Fire attack incoming," The stranger said as he hopped off of the saddle and landed on Appa's lower back just as a large fire blast shot towards them. "baldy, give me your staff!" The stranger called, holding a hand out. Despite his shock at an air-bender who could also firebend, Aang reacted quickly and tossed the stranger his staff. The stranger took a deep breath before he waved it, sending an air blast which knocked the fire into a glacier, the damage from the glast caused bits of the glacier to fall down and damage Zuko's ship. "Wow, that was cool." The stranger breathed before he stepped back into the saddle and tossed the staff back to Aang before he sat down.
"Who are you?" Katara asked.
"My name's Harry." The stranger said as he closed his eyes and pulled his hood down, revealing a messy, raven black set of hair, he pulled off the black mask that covered the lower part of his face. Katara's eyes widened as she looked at the handsome boy in front of her, she damn near fainted when he opened his eyelids to reveal a brilliant pair of emerald green eyes.
"I...hold on a sec!" Sokka quickly said as he looked Harry up and down. "You...you can airbend...and...and firebend! But...but your not the Avatar because Aang is! And...and your fire is green! The...there's only one person you could be...you...you're him...you're the 'Exception', the...you're the 'Emerald Dragon'!"
Comments
Melisande Peralta
Can't wait for more!
Cian O'Malley
So hooked and can't wait to see more of this
