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4.39 In Which the Dark Lord Reflects on the Eve of Battle

🕑 Added 2023-04-17 21:27:42 +0000 UTC

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Finn Ryan

"it shouldn’t prove too had to wipe them out" should be hard

nokko

Hopefully the title drop comes in a one-off toilet paper gag or something.

nokko

Holy crap. By far the best bit of dialogue in Villains so far, I think. Excited to see how this book of OVDT concludes and what comes in the next one. I spotted a few typos: The tunnel entrance was **a**/**at** the base of a tall outcropping of stone—rather steep and narrow compared to most geological features on Dount Once I kicked off an actual **arm’s**/**arms** race… Soon as we have a safe position inside the walls, it shouldn’t prove too **had**/**hard** to wipe them out, street by street.

Federico

This chapter is one of the best one so far. Thank you.

Joe ?

It sounds like the Viryan culture is a lot like that of Praes from a Practical Guide to Evil. It even kind of sounds like the Dark Lord fills the role of the Dread Emperor. Someone who knows they can do it better, and the will to see it through.

0th Law

Honestly was initially surprised that Seiji didn't know how cartridges work. I learned about that when I was 11ish. But I suppose that's the difference between growing up in Japan and the US.

Luís Silva

Now this is the good stuff, well done.

Too Much Sanity May Be Madness

Iiiinteresting. I thought that this was set to line up with my personal definitions of villains and heroes: that heroes believe the problems with the world are the creations of bad people in a good system, and try to restore the status quo, whereas villains believe that the system itself is the problem, and try to upend the status quo (the truth being, of course, more complex than either, because people create and perpetuate systems, and systems indoctrinate people). ...But this seems less like that and more like the Chaos/Lawful axis in D&D. Because you can have a Lawful character who rebels against a regime, so long as they stick to their own code of honour. But a true Chaotic character is a creature of feeling and whim, who does what feels like the right thing in the moment (however selfishly or altruistically their morality defines it) rather than trying to act consistently. Who would, as Velaven indicates, want to create their own new vision for a shining future rather than bring an old one back from their memories. And since Seiji is approximately Neutral Good, even though he makes a _fantastically_ good example of a villain by my standards, he isn't Chaotic enough to meet the Viryan definition. Given the title of the work, I wonder if that will change...

Aaron Archer

Systemic change is incremental or it's monstrously damaging to the previous system. Some systems need complete overhauls like Fflyr and some could use incremental change, but selling people boring incremental change is very hard to do, even if that's your goal.

Leaf

The worlds you make man. It’s something else. I wonder how many politicians rise to power by trying to emulate villainy like politicians here promise change?

Sleepless

Not gonna lie, I was half expecting a title drop here. Glad to get a confirmation on the nature of the goblin explosives. Now they just need to figure out cased ammunition. Here's hoping for more Velaven and Seiji interactions.


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