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The Hefty Price of Magic (TG-Queen)

🕑 Added 2023-12-12 02:36:34 +0000 UTC
The Hefty Price of Magic (TG-Queen)

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Kasdfdsak

Thank you! :D I really like the way you made the mana theme. With the idea of stealing mana, but from a place that doesn't use it yet, I can't really decide if they were doing something bad or not. Either way magic is dangerous, and hubris was her downfall. It was also pretty cool that it was very earth-like. I liked the subtle wonder and appreciation for the megalithic metal and glass buildings made without magic. Great story.

last_of_workers

Well, what can we say?... When handling unstable magic, you need to be as careful as possible... Although the cruel truth here is that there could be no other way for this story... The magician was not able to foresee that the portal would suck him in, he couldn’t have known that magic in the new world would work differently... Perhaps he could have tried to restrain his emotions, but at that moment, alas, it was no longer important... In general, I liked the story... Will there be a continuation? ? For example, about how she accidentally became a “mom” while she was persuading another guy to start learning magic?


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