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Forever tied: Love between deities (Com)

🕑 Added 2024-01-16 01:49:00 +0000 UTC
Forever tied: Love between deities (Com)

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last_of_workers

Hmmm the finale came out very well and I had a lot of interesting thoughts about this... I hope you don’t mind me expressing them (and forgive me for the possible confusion, I’m just overwhelmed with ideas and emotions) First of all, thank you for how well you were able to convey their relationship, their sincere love and their wonderful arguments... I can see these wonderful scenes and wonderful nights of use right before my eyes... Thank you very much for your efforts I also have a problemthought... We know that both the “mad king” and the “church” really don’t like our heroes... Now imagine what will happen if these two forces unite... It’s scary to imagine how powerful an army they can assemble. ... I doubt that our heroes will be able to win in such a situation, then let’s admit honestly that only Knight can give any serious rebuff to the enemies, since Princess is not a fighter at all... Perhaps she has several battle elixirs, but they are most likelyabout just random by-products from the production of healing potions... Loren and Vellith could possibly fight back, but knowing them, they will simply prevent each other from fighting... Well, as for Edracia, Pefsa and Liwet, at least they have potential to become a good fighting team, but they never strived for this; in general, our heroes still have no chance of winning a serious battle One more thing... Initially when I described this part I was expecting a more classic presentation“necromancer” and “shaman” but the way you demonstrated it... This is a thousand.... Not even a million times better than what I imagined, thank you very much for this Another interesting point... We have already seen that there are many races in this world... So the question is, could it be that a potion that is a medicine for elves will turn out to be poison for goblins? Or something else like that? It will be interesting... One more thought to follow up on the previous one... Alchemy implies not onlyabout the use of plants but also some other more... Specific ingredients... For example, is it possible to ask Vellit to file his horns? I am sure that the crushed tiefling horn will turn out to be a very valuable ingredient, but there is also Liwet with its feathers... I am sure that the properties, for example Flight feathers will differ from the properties of Outline feathers... But there is also such a thing as “a feather given voluntarily by an angel” and of course we must not forget about emotions such as rage or lust... I’m sure thatthis is just an unplowed field of possibilities for experimenting with potions... The main thing is not to get carried away and not pluck all the angel's feathers... and yes, about the plot... it’s very good, although I really expected much more... a banal option, but here I can only thank you... I also want to thank you for adding a short narrative episode to each part about how they talked in the past world and also a special low bow to you for the fact that they were connected in a past lifeand this added some spice to the story... but what’s a pity is that the role of Loren and Vellith in this episode was minimal... of course, thank you for not forgetting about them, but it’s a pity that you paid so little attention to them... although it’s possible It’s not your fault, I fully admit the possibility that their active participation in this episode could only ruin everything Oops, I think I'm really getting too carried away with this topic... Time to wrap up... Overall, I really enjoyed this episode and can't waitnext part (and yes, I know what will happen next but I don’t intend to give spoilers to your other readers)


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