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🕑 Added 2023-02-10 09:00:04 +0000 UTC

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HarmonyMotion

Maybe come back later :P

Thriolkos

I've given this feedback before but I'm still hoping the " evil" girl aspect goes up a notch, which is what this story was polled on, no? Still doesn't feel truly villainous to me and more of an antihero. Renata/Superior's buildup was similar but at least the moral compass fell dark much quicker in those stories.

Vwolfy19

Piggybacking from this, she should use a slew of powers on him. Invading his dreams at some point. Killing him and bringing back to life while trying different powers.

Finyet

Visit the Home of a rich/ celebrity guy she has a crush on. Toy with him, hunt him down. Let him think he's safe in his panic room for a moment, then tear it apart before doing what she wants to him...

HarmonyMotion

Scenes and interactions, not powers!


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