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Edited C38 (it’s here so you don’t have to go back and read)
🕑 Added 2024-04-12 05:11:30 +0000 UTCI was going back and reading through some of the older chapters and noticed that this one was low on likes. My guess was that this was because I may have made Peter a bit too sympathetic towards Corvus(this takes place after Proxima died) so I edited it to make him less sympathetic.
Here is the edit:
Peter, with his resolve firm and adrenaline still surging, experienced a fleeting moment of discomfort. He had not initiated this conflict and bore no regrets for his actions. However, seeing Corvus's alien face twisted in grief was certainly unsettling.
“…” Upon witnessing this scene, Peter came to understand that even heinous, evil individuals, much like Thanos's devoted minions, are not devoid of personal relationships. There exist individuals in their lives, perhaps family or friends, who, despite everything, would feel the impact of their loss and mourn their absence.
‘Thankfully, they’re both pieces of trash, so I don’t have to feel too bad…’ Peter concluded.
Suddenly, the air around them tensed, a palpable shift in energy as Corvus’s sorrow quickly turned to fury. His eyes, lifting from Proxima’s still form, locked onto Peter with an intensity that promised retribution. The atmosphere crackled with his rage, the ground beneath him seeming to quake in anticipation of his vengeance.
Peter, aware of the imminent danger, clenched his lightsaber, bracing for Corvus's advance. "How about we end this before anyone else gets hurt? Just surrender," he suggested firmly, sending a quick look towards Yoda, subtly asking for backup, yet his posture showed he was prepared to stand his ground.
A/N: That’s it, hopefully you guys like this edit. I’m about to cook some food and then I’m starting on the Spider-Man chapters as planned.
