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Project Palawan 001: a pitch for the main character

🕑 Added 2025-05-01 17:00:26 +0000 UTC

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RJay_the_Great

I like the idea of him approaching and being proactive to others, but maybe more aggressively than most. I think he has the right amount of muscle, maybe a little thinner, but overall great physique. Maybe to add to the story, he works at the beach as either a lifeguard or at a stand, and during either his break or lunch he goes out then and tries to "score" as many guys as he can. Also, the glasses are a perfect fit for him.

Maruten

I will experiment for the next post as a poll, to vote on traits like body type and so on. I'm still trying to figure out how, but I think I have something that could work!

Maruten

Yes actually that is a good point, if others flocked to him, it would be too easy. I thought of a few elements like "friendship meter" and so on. It will be interesting that the main protag is not just making relationships but breaking some too lol

Maruten

And this nerd knows how to get action!

Maruten

I had thought of an idea of a jock (fit with muscles), that just happens to wear glasses and is not a "nerd", but it could very well be a balancing act.

Maruten

Yes I had thought of making him just a little more built (the original sketch he was quite thin!) I'm hoping to sketch him a bit more soon.

Maruten

INFJ's are good listeners too. Yes I think the calculating gamer would be a lot of fun to work with!

Drew J

What you described works perfectly! The one thing I’d add is that he is on the shorter side.

Jessica Mae

I really like a lot about this protagonist character concept, but I think it would make sense that the other guys on the island don't immediately flock to him. The protag sees each of these guys as side quests which have their own requirements he has to fill to "complete" the side quest, so he has this mentality of studying guys to get a sense of who they are, and then tries to figure out the nuances of their personalities in order to know what to say/do to get what he wants out of them, almost like he sees the rest of them as NPCs or at the very least not on the same level as him as "The Player Character". Also, I think a gamer slotting into the player architype is very clever and pretty hot.

Jay Asher

As described is great, I always find the nerd getting to be the one to initiate and be top or versa instead of seeming to always be bottom or pursued by big jock or muscle bro

Lucca Berger

I actually like the sketches of the gamer!!! I think the glasses are cute and could give it that "surprise" moment when he undresses at the pool for the first time...noone expects him to be hot, but he damn is! 😜 One thing I always love is to see him unshaved and bushy, but I guess that should come quite naturally with gamers 😊 And coming back to the glasses, could be quite funny when they are fogging up due to steamy sex or in a hot tub 😜

Dwebble

I think glasses suit him very well. I say keep them and do what you want to do. Rehearsing suggestions I would love to see a very horny short guy, maybe 5.4ft or just under maybe. Despite his size, he is actually a very controlly top dom master and loves controlling people during sex but is incredibly introverted with everything else. Another idea would be a Jock bottom who likes be controlled, although appears to be a leader, is very cowardly. I think the pair would be a great idea. If you were trying to come up with some resort areas you could have nudist beaches, erotic massage palour, gloryhole dungeons and more. Or even maybe a public cumdump guy that no one ever sees the face of untill the very end of the story

Tigermaster

So I like a lot about the character. I have a few suggestions. First I would define the muscles a tad bit more. I'd say ditch the glasses and keep the hair the same. I love the idea of the dick being so huge that the swimwear can hide it. Love that he is horny I think it would be fun that guys think he is attractive that some guys admire him from a distance because they are to nervous to approach him but the protagonist approaches them first. I could also envision some guys who are a bit more confident approaching the protagonist. I can also see the protagonist getting a boner a lot especially if he sees a really attractive guy. Also for his personality I love that he is extremely energetic but considering he is horny a lot I think he would be extremely flirty. I also think it would be kinda fun for the protagonist not only see everything as a game or a sex game but I think it would also be fun for him wanting to have a harem to eventually have a threesome or a foursome.

JimmyWuff

Honestly, I love his personality as is. The cute, toned gamer nerd with big cock as a protag sounds perfect. And since he is INFJ, I could see him being very good at sex since he would focus on people's reactions and what works to get them off. He gets what he wants while also making sure they get what they need too. Also being a glasses wearing nerd would just go so perfect with him being the type to be calculating how to get in each guy's pants 🤓😈

Daio

I'm so on board with all of that as described. As for magnetism, I do love the occasional trope of a more traditional dom top shyly coming on to this incredibly hot nerd.