MultiEleonora96
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I need your help
🕑 Added 2021-07-01 09:38:18 +0000 UTCI know this is an illustration for 5$ tier of the last month but I have a huge doubt because I don't really like how this card came out, do you think I should try to make a new version?
Comments
Martín León
Honestly the only thing I don't like it is the position of the hand, it feels like you have it in a very unnatural pose to show off the claws. Everything else looks really good.
MultiE
Maybe yes!
Britt
I love the way this looks. I think it depicts not only Peter, but the Tower really well! You could always sketch out the other idea and see how you feel about it?
Sarah Marino
Try your first thought and then compare it
MultiE
I don't really like Peter's pose or the tower. At first I had another idea for this card but I couldn't draw it (with Peter collapsing between pieces of Tower, but his face would not be seen) but maybe it would have been better. what I would like to do now is try to rework the card to put Peter in a better pose as the tower collapses.
Sarah Marino
What do you mind about it? Can you put it into words
