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Blacksmith vs. the System 23

🕑 Added 2024-07-20 06:33:35 +0000 UTC

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"I couldn’t help but smirk, my mood was admittedly too good for someone who had been just assassinated. But, the idea of a private lab where I can actually experiment to my heart’s content was a good tradeoff. Still, I wasn’t above using guilt to push the limits of science. “There’s something about being assassinated by invisible people that really inspires me,” I snarked." I feel that it would be better to incorporate attempted assassination into the paragraph. A living man referring to having been just assassinated sounds too close to a bad machine translation of a cheap Chinese novel.


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