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Dragon's Tale 32

🕑 Added 2021-01-30 16:15:02 +0000 UTC

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Dirk Grey

Thanks, I'll make a note to go over it at the first opportunity.

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

It's a good chapter, but this is in some thorough need of cleaning. You're usually pretty good at this, so I never bother to mention the occasional linguistic error. But this chapter had a lot of them. Sometimes a word missing, sometimes the sentence structure was off, at other times the spelling was off. It really just had a lot of dirty paragraphs, and not of the kind you're aiming for ;D I'd argue for scheduling this chapter for a cleaning at some point.


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