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A Gamer Adventure 110

🕑 Added 2021-07-03 17:46:19 +0000 UTC

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Thx for the chapter

Douglas Karr

I'm fairly sure that thief was actually the princess, the royalty would have to be fairly strong as they could be afforded all the best methods of experience gain and leveling up

Pyro Hawk

>After the frustrating discovery that not only WAS the Princess’s party --was-- larger and stronger than I expected, but also their willingness to get involved in the chaos that surrounded the school in such a direct manner was much sharpe--d--R than I expected, I wanted to DO nothing but --a-- curse. Just some possible mistakes in the first paragraph. All Caps is a missing word, whereas -- -- is something that's the wrong letter, word or in the wrong place I think. Enjoying the chapter regardless! Edit: Other corrections >with my connection with the element of air --was-- enhanced >Only when there --were--WAS twenty feet between me and the ground DID I use--d-- magic to cushion my fall. This one I'm uncertain exactly what you said as there's several different ways to word the sentence better. Hope these aren't too problematic in the comments.


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