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A Gamer Adventure 17

🕑 Added 2020-03-03 07:25:53 +0000 UTC

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" Another assault later, took a hold of her arm, but only for a moment, because I didn't want to give her an opportunity to grab me." Something missing in this sentence.

" When I parried her next assault, I made sure to put enough strength behind my blow to make her sword veer out of my way, leaving me free to cut into". Cut into what??? @Dirk Grey

Sage

The section here at is missing something, I believe. The "cut into" part is definitely incomplete. 'When I parried her next assault, I made sure to put enough strength behind my blow to make her sword veer out of my way, leaving me free to cut into '

Omega573

“Excellent. Try to drop by occasionally, as it will get (BORING... etc) without Selena’s company,” Awesome chapter, the intrigue continues.

Eddie

Good ass chapter this is what I waiting for in my last comment , the last part was fucked why you got to cliffhanger me like that 😂


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