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A Gamer Adventure 15

🕑 Added 2020-02-02 20:18:21 +0000 UTC

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KingConner

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Sage

I'm fairly certain that the word commission in this quote should be commotion. “I would like to explain it, but I fear that the commission might bring some guards here"

Omega573

Wow... i love that there is actually a plot <3 so happy I get to read this...

Dirk Grey

Thanks for noticing. I was planning to do a comprehensive rewrite, but unfortunately the wrist injury ruined my schedule. I'm still going to do a rewrite at some point, but can't promise when.

Kabir Kumar

This chapter has quite a few grammar errors. That whole "thank you my liege, my lady, my queen" thing was a bit off-putting. Like, how did she not see through that, or call that out for not being how people talk?

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

I think you meant to write "A magnificent name for a magnificent girl/lady." And after posting this, I realize the person above came to the same conclusion in the latter part of his comment...

Shades LURKER

Awesome chapter ! 2 things to note. I think I read in a previous chapter that the Dire Fox is classe 2 opponent and in this chapter it is a classe 1. Is it intentional ? I have maybe detected another mistake at parargraphe 6 starting from the bottom, it should be “A magnificent name for a magnificent lady/dame” instead of “A magnificent name for a magnificent name,”.


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