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A Gamer Adventure 12

🕑 Added 2020-01-02 20:22:47 +0000 UTC

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" With an endurance of eight, I wasn't willing to bet on chance of not impregnating her. " "bet on the chance" sounds better and less confusing. My point of view anyway

Vox De Harlequin

I'm not a fan of him blindly choosing something as significant as a Skill, and that blindly chosen Skill randomly being so far removed from anything he had been doing thus far. Other than that, very good.

Dirk Grey

Happy to see you're enjoying the story. He's definitely going to progress in his real personality, and going to discard most of his fake personalities. The transformation is going to start in a few chapters, though it will happen in layers, with a controlled expansion rather than an explosive start.

Eddie

Damn these last 2 chapters were real good and I’m enjoying that it’s progressing a little bit more with skills and such . I’m wondering if eventually our main character is going to grow more into himself. I like the “mule” and I want him to become better and instead of changing into others have enough skills and abilities to do what he’s doing without lying . But that will be more endgame of the story or won’t happen at all. Cheers mate for the chapters . Can’t wait for next update !


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