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Unfair- Chapter 93: Little Voices: "Clark Says"

🕑 Added 2022-05-15 14:52:56 +0000 UTC

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After his brush with Ambrose it hasn’t taken Clark long to be a smarty pants again, hopefully he is bring lulled into a false sense of security and a big fall is coming his way. At the second photo day it looked like Ambrose already had pulled Tracey into line for her disobedience before she was saved from what was looking like a public panty or maybe even a diaper check by Brollish calling Ambrose off. That storyline had a lot of potential, hopefully it won’t be too long before Clark also gets to pay the piper for his smart arse attitude toward his teachers and Ambrose gets to remind him for more than just a couple of hours that she is now the one in charge. Janet will need at some point to save him from his destiny but that should only happen after he has been taken to the precipice of doom and left to hang there for an extended period. Great writing, thankyou.

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Good distraction strategy by Clark. Also he took it little easier than I admit I thought he would. I think perhaps he uses it against Beouf in the future now that he know how she explains things. I look forward to more!

I try not to be a spoiler. Especially ongoing stories, though I can't wait to see how this is going to go down. Though can see something happening to delay his perfect plan. Especially since you did foreshadow it way way back..... If you do that, could be something else now hehe

Based on how that comment (which is very much appreciated) was phrased, I'm going to avoid potential spoilers and sidestep by saying those are good questions.

Propaganda can be powerful and when everyone around you is using the same words, it gets harder and harder not to internalize them.

Amy scares even me sometimes, not gonna lie. And yeah, the fun part of this series is sometimes what you know has to have been discussed but the camera never shows it. The fun of first person POV.

Welcome back!

Yeah. If Amazons consider themselves "adults" it's very easy to underestimate kids. IRL, I've made that mistake, though I was usually proud and impressed when I got duped. Humbling and funny.

It was totally a cheap shot. And yeah. After all that tension it was good for some release.

Clark can be cute when he wants to be.

I'm glad you're enjoying it now. This is by far the longest thing I've ever written, but it's more that I've got a lot of story to tell and I'm glad I'm managing to keep up interest and quality. If this needed to be a short story I would have told it shorter. I needed this to be a long one though.

Love this chapter. Clark is setting up the groundwork for his escape and I have a few ideas of what it could be, but he is nowhere near ready if it what I think he might be doing. Though curious on how Janet and Beouf will take hearing about his game he just played.

Great chapter. I think Clark was testing the waters for the perfect distraction: how to get every eye in the room on a single focal point for a lengthy period of time. It worked with the two Daddies, so now he knows how to do it with other Amazons. Amy smells mischief. I also like the way Clark continues to slip up and call them Grown Ups or Daddies or Mommies in his internal monologue. Like the best of us, Clark is not immune to propaganda.

I would say this chapter is the most delightful one! While there is always the mystery of what Clark is planning, this chapter is just fun and wholesome! I also like how Clark takes a simple children’s game and still throws his usual twist on it. I hate to say it, but he would have caught me on at least one of those. I’m no match for Amy’s intellect, who clearly was able to spot what was going on the whole time haha. Anyone else here hoping for another play date between these two now that Clark thinks of them as equals? Also, I do wonder what the Amazon’s are discussing. You have to know Janet is grilling Amy’s mommy on what she did to bring a mastermind like her to heel…

Guilend

Very interesting. I wonder if the Tweener will finish with dry or clean pull ups or if she’ll leave in diapers. Clark is definitely going to be hurt when his plan to escape fails one way or another. I love Amy lol. I’m so happy to be able to continue reading this here on Patreon. You do such a wonderful job.

Jemsy

As usual, a great and fun to read chapter! I love the fun, almost competitive little jabs between Clark and Amy in this one. Also pretty funny how Clark knocked the Amazons out pretty quick, one might call it the hubris of giants haha! Very interested to see more from Amy and to learn more about Clark's escape plan!

I'm wondering when we're going to be let in on this plan Clark has been building in secret, that even we the audience don't know. Obviously whatever escape he's looking for will require the amazons to drop their guard enough, so he's in it for the long haul (although in story time it's been what, 2 months? maybe 3?). It's interesting to hear that Amy has never tried to escape. And I do trust her on that, she's sneaky but she isn't a liar as far as we've seen. The only thing she's ever refused to talk about is what happened to her teeth (which I assumed was from the animal attack she was rescued from, but the story says it happened while she was in Beouf's class). A good low energy chapter after a series of high intensity ones, though I did find myself counting along and invested in the game. That final one was a bit of a cheap shot though. Guess this game is also...unfair

This was so cute :)

babysofia1234

Not completely sure of Clarks intention here, but amusing to read! I think trying to escape from there is probably risky, but I guess maybe less risky than anywhere else...? Going to have to find the right watcher though! Side note: Congrats on by far the longest DD tale that's been written! You're well into George R Martin territory here and I have a feeling it'll be a while before you end? I'm going to enjoy re-reading this when you reach the finish someday!


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