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The Secret Society Ch. 7 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2023-02-17 20:21:19 +0000 UTC

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Markus Ellis

Yeah, this one might not be for you. Most of the main characters are not kind, and it'll only get worse. It sounds like you prefer the main character as a good guy, and this Harry is pretty much the anti-hero. But this is the only fic I'm writing that's like this, I think. So you're good there lol

Erinnyes

I admit I'm having trouble getting into this one because I honestly hate everyone in it except Luna. As nearly as I can determine, Harry has no qualities that make me want him to be successful or even healthy beyond his position as the main character. From what I can tell, you could set off fiendfyre in the dungeons and immediately make magical Britain at least 20% better for everyone else. There's a great many positive things to say about your technical writing, as always. The prose works, the dialog is sharp, the characters are interesting, and much more besides! I just... kinda think the world would be better off without every character in it but one, and that does not enhance the experience.

Markus Ellis

Yup, Harry will help Luna. That's all I'm saying lol

Alatoic

At last!! Really hope Harry will help Luna in an altruistic way, maybe that is what Luna was waiting for? then she can help him and he can learn to be real friend with someone.


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