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MAwS 1x08-09 Peekin Perry
🕑 Added 2023-08-31 23:33:35 +0000 UTCJust checking with you all: Are you able to tell that Perry is in his office at the Daily Planet, looking out the window, seeing Superman and Lois kiss? He's very tiny in panel 2, and I thought maybe I'd have to do another zoom-in panel.
Does it work fine as is or is there a potential for confusion?
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Jay Simpson
Maybe have his window be backlit. That'll make him pop when the sketch is colored.
The Cassiopeia Quinn Team
Perry with the scoop!
P K
It works in the sketch at least, because his image (in the second panel) stands out enough against the rest of it. Depending on how much detail you put it, it may not contrast as much. You could potentially make the second panel just slightly more zoomed in if you need to see him more, rather than a whole new panel.
