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The Death Audit

🕑 Added 2022-11-13 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

Comments

Ernst Laemmert

This was great! Like any good story story, it leaves me with so many questions I want answered!

noname4me

Aw cool; they so well done I wasn't sure if they were or not

Team Four Star

They were, but don't tell anybody it's a secret - Stephan

Freek Jansen

Excellent short story with great dark humor

noname4me

It was fun and funny short; really well shot, Were the ducks digital?

Geo Emperor

Grant is so Handsome with a Glorious Mustache!! Stephan is a wonderful director, I have been very impressed by his work on these short films.

Matt

Not bad. My one critique would be the bit about Ms. Alderman being a music teacher and Harold knowing the truth. I imagine there was going to be a slight scene shift to her raising a prodigy in a large concert. But when Harold said that the arts were low on the priority list, it made that scene a bit null and void in my opinion. From the hints of the scene with the piano student, she seems to be a good teacher. Harold and Ms. Alderman did a great job of staying in character the entire time. I thought the lemon squares bit was funny, to try and think that death auditors know some things about the world, but not everything. Like when he asks why they are made. I hope you guys are still able to make projects like this, and I hope it hits well at the film festival. There's not many comedies in theaters anymore that aren't lazily written and just filled with cameo celebrities.