Birth of Lynn COMPLETE
🕑 Added 2017-10-10 17:34:57 +0000 UTCHere is the whole comic finished. Since it was a partial commission, I'll keep it patreon exclusive for a month. I included the inked version of the third page since I really like it in B&W, even more than the colored version.
Hope you enjoy!
Comments
Bosstickler
I absolutely loved Lynn! She is the ultimate tickle monster!
Redscript
Oh, thank you, thank you very much! Yeah, since it was a commission (at least partial) it couldn't have been too long. I haven't thought about how they captured her. I think that Drake just offered Lynn a position where she could use her talents to her fullest, and Lynn went along.
Jackie Estacado
I am late to comment here, because I was having problems logging in from China. It is fixed now. Wow! I absolutely love Lynn (like a lot of people I am sure ^_^) and it was a real treat to see her as the main character~ You've made her just creepy enough, while keeping intact her playfulness and "affection" towards her victims. The last panel was absolutely fantastic! I love the mask's design, with the gas seeping through (I like to imagine there's a bit of foot odor thrown in the mix). The girl's desperation can really be felt in this image. IMO my only two criticisms are that the story's a tad too short(it left me hungry for more) and the torture scenes could have been a liiiiitle bit more intense (excluding the last panel). Also, if Lynn has grown so much, how did Drake Labs get a hold of her? Do they just teleport Aly to the station for her months-long punishment sessions? ^_^ Anyway, I sure would love to see more of Lynn in the future; do not hesitate to bring her back.
damage3245
Runaway tickle monsters are just the best and I like what you've done with Lynn
ghirighiri26
Absolutely fantastic!!!!!
RextheKobold
Absolutely fantastic! Outstanding work my friend. :)
Redscript
Timed it.
Redscript
Yeah, now that you mention it, I like it too. There is something more panicky about it, I think.
Redscript
Ay, ay.
Andrew Martinez
I love Lynn, I wish she was real lol :3
I really love it. Also I'm realizing I really love when armpit tickling is portrayed with hands under clothing so it's more implied. Not sure why.
Auranoir
You would finish right after I finished getting off to pornhub while complainin it wasn't finished yet. My luck