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Chapter 17 - Insight
🕑 Added 2019-02-10 02:28:16 +0000 UTCHopefully you're all having a wonderful Sunday! This is ending up being a very chunky chapter, not completely done, but mostly there.
New exciting news, audio for book 1 is in final edits, so that should come out in the next few weeks, and my art is getting closer, so we have a VERY tentative date for release for book 2 of March 15th!
Comments
Jay - Siphon
Yeah, this is first draft and all of those things were fixed in revision. I mostly shut off commenting on chapters because I kept getting comments on stuff that I'd long since fixed. Like... people were commenting on book one stuff and it kept sending me notifications and driving me mad, so the privilege got revoked.
Zachary Stading
When Jade is looking at her stat sheet she says lucky went up by two instead of luck. Then when Jade goes back to her room she says that she donner her clothes instead of donned her clothes. I would make the suggestion on the doc, but for some reason this chapter is not set up to make suggestions like the others.
Scruffleupagas
This isn't just about the individual though, it's also for the reader. Even if taken in book form rather than patreon who knows how long it's been since they looked at the tables?
Jay - Siphon
Nah, it's up to the individual to know and remember what has upgraded. The world doesn't provide that for them, so neither do I.
Rande Knight
Instead of having several paragraphs stating all of the skill upgrades, in the table put +X beside each to show how many levels they've grown since the table was last displayed?
