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Sense Chapter 004 - Preparation
🕑 Added 2018-12-08 00:22:34 +0000 UTCWooh, finally catching up on chapters! Not sure I like the title of this one though, so if anyone can think of a better name, let me know! <3
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Aaron Canning
...sometime she'd decided to do... should be "something"
Jay - Siphon
Thanks! I like Outpost better, and I fixed that sentence. ^_^
Dax
Great chapter! Maybe "Outpost", or "Digging In" would be good titles? Also the double negative in this sentence tripped me up a bit as i was reading initally. "It wasn't like she hadn't slept terriblly last night ..."
